Wednesday, August 07, 2013

“WinterTown” story and art by Stephen Emond

Ehh. Following up on the well-reviewed “Happyface” (which I have not read) comes Stephen Emond’s semi-romance between Evan and Lucy, a couple that may or may not be working against fates to come together. Their childhood friendship has devolved into a two-week winter-break get-together ever since Lucy’s dysfunctional family split apart, sending her to live in the south with a mother more concerned about her next boyfriend than the welfare of her child. Evan looks forward to their limited time together – relaxing into an old, comfy relationship in a sea of New England snow – but recognizes that this visit, during his pressure-filled Senior year of High School, has the two of them at very different places in life. With a strong desire to be an artist (drawings and comics fill the book), he struggles with his father’s demands that he apply to the most demanding colleges so that he can become a chip off the old block. Lucy, living nearly on her own, has fallen into some scary behavior and is too sad and angry to find comfort in a world that now seems alien to her. The book takes place (mostly) over this one two-week period and has a fair amount of angst as the two would-be lovers struggle to connect. On the plus side, the characters are strong and it is refreshing to see a romantic story with a male lead. Supplemental characters, such as the gay friends, the parents and grandparents, are well-filled out and the tendency to stereotype them is mostly avoided. It makes the novel feel real, which might explain the kind of messy, non-linear feel to the book. The drawings enrich the story by underpinning the tone and the title “WinterTown” becomes obvious as a theme when you compare the fake holiday town Evan’s dad puts up each year with the kind of distant view of the city which Lucy sees outside of her plane window. It is a “tonal” novel overall. Events don’t run smoothly and there are a lot of random bits that just don’t seem to fit – it’s not clear, for instance, as to how/where Lucy gets her plane ticket to come up for the visit as her mother is not currently in the picture. Another disconnect is the comic excerpt at the end of each chapter. The two young people have created a world in their joint comic “Aelysthia,” but the storyline in the comic doesn’t further the narrative, rather it seems to be an esoteric comment on the latest fight between the two leads. Aelysthia is supposed to be “instantly recognizable” by a sun that vomits, but that image is never included in any of the strips until the lengthy addendum at the end of the book. The result is a choppy story that doesn’t so much draw you in as it challenges you to figure out what is happening. I didn’t feel like I was entering Evan’s world, I felt like I was spying on a slice of his life. It didn’t engender me to the story and I didn’t feel overly compelled to push through it as it was coming off as yet another one of those semi-autobiographical fiction-but-not-fiction novels I dislike … there are just too many “inside references” that I can’t understand as reader. That being said, Lucy’s take on “the perfect night” is terrific and Evan’s grandmother is the kind of person we should all aspire to be. Worth it, I guess, if you are a guy who appreciates a certain amount of randomness, longs for a girl you don’t think you can have, and wonders whether the path your family has set for you is the right one.

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