Wednesday, August 07, 2013

“The Disenchantments” by Nina LaCour

Another slice-of-life/more memoir-than-fiction book, this one holds together better than others I have read of late. The week-long tale covers a post-high school road trip by artist guy Colby and three girls who make up the neo-Riot Grrl band, “The Disenchantments.” The title of the band, and book, is extremely apropos, given that this is a week where the young people must let go of their made-up dreams and embrace the uncertainty of the real world. This isn’t so much a romance book as an anti-romance book – Colby’s plans with his best friend, Bev, are shattered quickly, leaving all four occupants of a tripped-out, ancient VW bus to contemplate their fates as they travel to low-rent bars in small towns during a farewell tour. The charm of the book is the road trip. Quintessential in our collective dreaming about life, road trips are the ultimate “go-do” for almost everyone I have ever met. Real charm is found in the quirky and delightful people they meet, the conversations and reflections they have along the way, and their efforts to make an impact on the places they visit even as the trip changes them on a visceral level. The experiences here struck me as universal, and they are a huge part of why the book left me with such a strong impression. I didn’t love it – more happens internally with Colby than externally with the story, but the characters are strong and their “longing” drew me in. Thinking about my own personal need to just get out of Dodge and have some adventures made this a perfect pick for this moment in my life. While well-written, and with tremendous detail chronicling, well, everything, there were a couple of things that nagged. First – the book is a little exhausting to read. With no chapter breaks (the only breaks you get are between days, but even that pretense is dropped mid-week) this felt like stream of consciousness. There were no natural stopping points to step away and consider what you have taken in so far. The result was a pressing need to read straight through – and it is not a short book. I have the luxury right now of doing that, so I was able to finish it in a couple of days, but my “normal” life involves very short spurts to read. I would have liked the opportunity to tuck in the bookmark and not feel like I was leaving in the middle of things. Since the entire book is essentially about one question, I knew I wouldn’t get the answers I wanted until the end, so eventually I just crashed and did a marathon read. There were also two, somewhat glaring, inconsistencies (in a book that cataloged every minute of every day). One is a forgotten amp, which leads our intrepid protagonist to make a major alteration to his plan. The amp is retrieved, but then he careens off in another direction and it is never quite clear how the thing ends up at the next location. Did they haul it across a horse farm? Leave it on the bus for someone else to retrieve in Portland? We never find out.  Also, less glaring, but curious, an important tattoo image appears several times but is treated differently in each instance. The first time, a cell-phone picture is taken and sent to Colby’s dad. The second time, the tattoo is more important, as it has a huge influence on Colby, but he doesn’t record the image. More odd, than anything. In any case, this is a book of dreams. If you dream about shaking your life up, taking some risks, and maybe discovering a new road to travel, it’s the perfect pick. As the writer herself says, “There is something about distance, being removed from what’s familiar, that lets things happen.”

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