Tuesday, November 25, 2014

"Prophecy" by Ellen Oh

Again, low expectations led to a nice surprise.  With echoes of Mulan, Cinder, Xena, and a host of other warrior women stories, this "newbie author" has jumped on the woman-power wagon, but with enough originality to make it a fresh tale.  Kira is a soldier in a mythical Korean time.  She fights demons (by hacking off their heads -- and then black ooze comes out) but struggles with her identity as a female in a society that has certain expectations as to her role.  There is, of course, a prophecy, which is typically ambiguous but is easy to guess from the title and cover art.  In general, this is not a book of subtleties.  Nonetheless, I learned a lot about Korean culture without the book being too didactic, and there is real authenticity in the tone, which is fairly formal throughout.  It is that tone which can make the narrative seem stiff from time to time.  I didn't take issue with it -- but the language of the book did not "flow" as much as it had hard stops and starts.  One device I wasn't fond of were the repeated efforts to jump into Kira's dreams and not have the reader realize they were reading a dream sequence.  It didn't work since the events were clearly part of a dream, and it made transitions clunky.  Other than that, it was enjoyable, and had a good bit of action -- enough to entertain your basic online gamer.  What with the decapitations, archery and occasional groin kick (yes, the "good guys" deal these out from time to time ... unusual) it is the kind of story that should grab and hold readers who like their fiction visceral.  We will see the author, a local, in December.  I look forward to meeting her.

Friday, November 07, 2014

"Before Wings" by Beth Goobie


I knew nothing about this book by Canadian Beth Goobie other than the fact that it has shown up on multiple recommended lists for teens.  This being said, it took me a long time, a really long time, to figure out what it was about.  In many ways, it is an "atmosphere" novel -- the images and prose are lyric and striking with the "action" of the story being somewhat less important.  There is Adrien, a snarky, surly teenage girl dealing with a big health issue, the ultimately stereotypical summer camp run by Adrien's stoic, distant aunt, the roomate who is a complete opposite to Adrien and a cute boy named Paul.  There is also a bully, a lot of mayflies, some ghosts and a little "magical realism."  So, it is a book that is many things.  Because it was well-written, I was able to keep moving through it even though Adrien's behavior made me want to smack her from time to time (maybe that is just a thing with 15 year-olds ... felt the same way when Harry Potter turned 15).  At one point, I did think that Adrien would have been more appealing as a protagonist if it were first-person narration instead of third-person -- at least then we could know the thought processes driving this (w)itchy young lady.  On a small note, I wasn't wild about the cursing/smoking aspects of the novel, which seemed to be inserted, rather than organic.  The big problem, for me, is that the different threads never really pulled together as much as they just sat there.  As a realistic novel, it's good.  The characters are "alive" and complex and seem to go through the kinds of journeys that teens face, particularly in making friends.  As a romance, I guess it's fine.  I don't like romance and found this element of the tale to be predictable and sappy.  As a mystery, it's not really a "big resolve" as a "okay, so what?" (this is, in large part, because of an ending that seemed rushed and a bad guy that was fairly one-dimensional).  As magical realism, however, I was intrigued.  Adrien's interactions with the spirits was powerful, and, although inconsistent at times, was the most engaging part of the tale to me.  Paul's experiences were less interesting, and I liked his family and bike-riding sides a good bit more than the "scary dreams" he obsessed over.  So, in the end, it's not bad, it's not good ... I think you get out of it what you bring to it.